Get your manuscript to its best possible version with my editorial services. Your writing will get the attention it deserves with my careful and thorough editing and/or feedback. 

I currently offer three services to help you polish your fiction writing: a line editing & copyediting combo, copyediting, and beta reading.

"I've been working with Lila for over two and a half years. She does an outstanding job every single time. She's also stellar at scheduling and communicating any concerns."
Lexa Luthor
f/f Romance Author

FOR WRITERS WHO . . .

Want guidance on

  • Dialogue
  • Action beats
  • Length, rhythm & flow of sentences
  • Point of view
  • Verb tense
  • Telling vs. showing

Want someone to comb through their manuscript for

  • Awkward sentences
  • Grammar, punctuation & spelling errors
  • Typos
  • Repetition & redundancy
  • Inconsistencies & contradictions
  • Serious factual errors
  • Potentially harmful language

WHAT YOU GET:

  • 2 rounds of edits, with an author review after the first
  • In-line edits using Track Changes so that you can accept or reject each revision
  • Comments, questions & suggestions in the margins
  • An editorial letter that includes overall comments, issues & suggestions
  • A style sheet documenting capitalization, spelling, punctuation, grammar rules, style preferences, and character & place names
  • A half-hour Zoom meeting to discuss the edits, after the first or second round of editing (optional)
Copyedit service

FOR WRITERS WHO . . .

Want someone to comb through their manuscript for

  • Awkward sentences
  • Grammar, punctuation & spelling errors
  • Typos
  • Repetition & redundancy
  • Inconsistencies & contradictions
  • Serious factual errors
  • Potentially harmful language

WHAT YOU GET:

  • 2 rounds of edits, with an author review after the first
  • In-line edits using Track Changes so that you can accept or reject each revision
  • Comments, questions & suggestions in the margins
  • An editorial letter that includes overall comments, issues & suggestions
  • A style sheet documenting capitalization, spelling, punctuation, grammar rules, style preferences, and character & place names
  • A half-hour Zoom meeting to discuss the edits, after the first or second round of editing (optional)

FOR WRITERS WHO . . .

Want reliable and honest feedback—from a reader’s point of view—on

  • Readability/clarity
  • Characters
  • Dialogue
  • Setting
  • Opening & ending
  • Plot
  • Pacing
  • Overall impression

WHAT YOU GET:

  • Comments (in the manuscript margins) that tell you when I had questions, made certain assumptions & predictions, or felt a specific emotion
  • A reader’s report (2–4 pages)
  • Answers to any questions regarding specific aspects of your story (I will need this list before I begin reading)
  • A half-hour Zoom meeting to ask me further questions (optional)
"Her communication is very good, and she is understanding as well. I loved working with Lila."
Krys Rayne
Fiction Author